His Omega (Werewolves of Manhattan, #1)

His Omega (Werewolves of Manhattan, #1) On His Way Home From A Meeting Of The North American Werewolf Council, Armand La Marche Is Stopped In His Limousine By A Boy Who Is Hurt By An Unknown Assailant Who Murdered His Friend After Decades Of Searching, Armand Has Found His Mate There Is One Problem, Someone Is Trying To Kill Sean Sean Quinn S Friend Leroy Was Gutted Trying To Protect Him He Runs For Help And Stops The First Car He Sees Armand LaMarche Is Head Alpha Of The North American Werewolf Council And Was In His Limousine On His Way Home To His Manhattan Brownstone When The Wounded Boy Stops His Car, Armand Recognizes Two Things The Boy Is Part Wolf, An Omega With A Great Gift, And He S Armand S Mate Now All Armand Has To Do Is Claim His Mate And Keep Him Safe From The Murderer. 1.5 StarsI m sorry, but I can not recommend this and I RARELY ever say that I m usually a YMMV, but for the price of this and the content I just can t justify to anyone forking over that kind of cash I apologize to the author for this opening remark, but it s the truth, in my opinion.Now onto the story There were editing errors like crazy and if I spend 6.99 US it better be damn near perfection I can normally overlook so much, but it was like everything was glaring at me Not even grammar p 1.5 StarsI m sorry, but I can not recommend this and I RARELY ever say that I m usually a YMMV, but for the price of this and the content I just can t justify to anyone forking over that kind of cash I apologize to the author for this opening remark, but it s the truth, in my opinion.Now onto the story There were editing errors like crazy and if I spend 6.99 US it better be damn near perfection I can normally overlook so much, but it was like everything was gl
This book started out well It was as if I was reading lines onlyI could not find the chemistry of the MC s I got a lot of descriptive information I NEED chemistry This was clearly not for me. DNF d at 28% because the writing was just so ludicrous Smarmy, unrealistic dialogue and characters I wanted to spork to death. Unfortunately, this book suffered from having first book in a series syndrome by spending too much time on world building Sean Quinn is beaten by the man he thought to be his father and then kicked out of the house Cut off from his money, he is faced with having to drop out of school just a month or so short of finishing In a final attempt to make money any way he can, he considers selling himself on the streets, like his friend Leroy While Leroy is starting to train Sean, they cross the p Unfortunately, this book suffered from having first book in a series syndrome by spending too much time on world building Sean Quinn is beaten by the man he thought to be his father and then kicked out of the house Cut off from his money, he
I had a very difficult time finishing this book as it just seemed to be missing too much I am generously giving it a 2 star rating and hoping that the next books in the series are better. I got about forty five or so pages in and realized that I had already written half that many pages griping about editing problems, plot problems, and a general dislike of the main character because he was TSTL So I gave up Then I tried again a day or so later, but no, just no, theI tried to read theirritated I got I thought about getting my notes out for this review but decided that a ten page review on a book I didn t finish didn t even make it halfway through was probably no I got about
I LOVED the story line but the writing was veryunderwhelming The editing was awful There were sequences out of order, missing words, grammar and so muchI normally don t judge a book based on the editing Authors aren t always totally responsible for this, a publisher should make sure a lot of these errors are caught This case is an exception because of the extreme nature and the fact that it puts so many errors into the story itself.I did like the characters Sean is a little unbel I LOVED the story line but the writing was veryunderwhelming The editing was awful There were sequences out of order, missing words, grammar and so muchI normally don t judge a book based on the editing Authors aren t always totally responsible for this, a publisher should make sure a lot of these errors are caught This case is an exception because of the extreme nature and the fact that it puts so many errors into the story itself.I did like the characters Sean
3.5 starsMany people found editing errors, well in my case it didn t bother me at all. English is my second language and I m crap at it, so I enjoyed this story.I had some issues though, the times the word baby was mentioned it drove me insane.Here, I will give you some ideas that can be use for next time, darling, honey, sweetheart, babe, my love, and never the less Armand was french why don t use mon amour, mon ange, mon ch ri and manyBut no such a luck, the freaking baby was in ever 3.5 starsMany people found editing errors, well in my case
Cheesy goodness Clearly it s a winner with Joel Leslie narrating. 3.5 1 1 2 of the stars are for the audioA few days ago a friend sent me a pic of his late night snack a frosted Twinkie with sprinkles on two scoops of vanilla ice cream I almost threw up in my mouth because I m generally the person who skips dessert after diner Not a sweets lover At all And yet oh Joel Leslie the things you make me do If you re in a generous mood, need to have your hands free, and don t want to engage your brain too much this might work for you This is bas 3.5 1 1 2 of the stars are for the audioA few days ago a friend sent me a pic of his late night snack a frosted Twinkie with sprinkles on two scoops of vanilla ice cream I almost threw up in my mouth because I m generally the person who skips dessert after diner Not a sweets lover At all And yet oh Joel Leslie the things you make me do If you re in a generous mood, need to have your hands free, and don t want to engage your brain too much this might work for you This is basically a Cinderella story of pure, good, and unknowingly talented Sean meeting his true mate Armand, the most powerful and rich Alpha in North America and falling head over heels for each other I m willing to accept all the blah blah blah that goes with the creation of this world, where Sean is cavity i