The Elements of Love

The Elements of Love Official Description Following An Attack On His City, A Firefighter Returns To His Mountain Retreat As He Has Done Every Seven Years Since His Birth Once There, He Waits For The Only Two Men Who Know His True Identity.When They Arrive They Discover That The Key To The World S Fate Rests In Their Own Hands.This Intense, Erotic, Short Story Blends SciFi And Magic Like Never Before.Original Prompt Dear Author,I Am Intrigued With This Photo And These Men They Are Uniquely Individual, But Together They Are Power And Magic I Imagine They Are Not Quite Of This World Though What That World Would Be And Who They Are Within It, Is Your Story To Tell One Minor Deet I M Really Not Much Of A D S Or BDSM Fan Photo Description Three Gorgeous Men Lie With Heads Together, Two Facing One Way, The Other Between Them Reversed Their Intent Eyes Gaze Up Out Of The Picture One S Dark Skinned, Curly Haired, Full Featured With Dark Eyes The Next S A Pale Skinned Brunet With Blue Eyes The Last Has Olive Skin And Dark Eyes They Touch Hands Lightly, The Connection Between Them Palpable.This Story Was Written As A Part Of The M M Romance Group S Hot Summer Days Event Group Members Were Asked To Write A Story Prompt Inspired By A Photo Of Their Choice Authors Of The Group Selected A Photo And Prompt That Spoke To Them And Wrote A Short Story.Download The Story, Read It Online Or Find It In Don T Read In The Closet, Volume 1.__________Genre Sci Fi, Fantasy, M NageTags Gay M M, Threesome, Friends To Lovers, Firefighter, Futuristic, MagicWord Count 3,632 The story started interesting the world building seemed ingenious, though it was depicted very superficially Great idea for a full length novel, but it didn t work for a short story.The erotic scene lacked intimacy or affection I didn t feel any connection between the characters, though their bonding was the key momentum of the plot, the whole point of the story their bonding was to wake their elemental, connected power It was written that we could bring balance to the world when united in The story started interesting the world building seemed ingenious, though it was depicted very superficially Great idea for a full length novel, but it didn t work for a short story.The erotic scene lacked intimacy or affection I didn t feel any connection bet
3 elemental stars What does fire need to burn This shortie certainly get points for originality I liked the world build, but as the story progressed there s not much said about it, it just morphed into a kind of hot, but a bit confusing menage sex scene I really liked the element idea, but I would have liked a better connection between Earth Air and Water It was like it says so in the story so we should do it I missed aemotional co 3 elemental stars What does fire need to burn This shortie certainly get points for originality I liked the world build, but as the story progressed there s not much said about it, it just morphed into a kind of hot, but a bit confusing menage sex scene I really liked the element idea, but I would have liked a bette
3 stars After having read the first few pages, I was absolutely sure that this book wouldn t be my cup of tea The author however managed to spike my interest by introducing the power of the four elements It is something I haven t encountered much in my previous reads and I definitely think that the whole setting has a lot of potential A big part of the story is unfortunately f
Read as part of the free Don t Read in the Closet Volume One anthology Story 25 This would have worked better as a full length novel The world building was to complex Too much info without explaining enough.I didn t like the forced sex It s all like We have to have sex to save the world 2.5 stars I was really confused by this one I think it was too short for the world it created It mentioned a lot of stuff but never developed anything I still don t even know what Water is in this story The sex at the end was jumbled or maybe it was just me but I couldn t follow along with it Nice premise Decent writing Very short It was just sex for the sake of sex But that s ok too. It takes three to make fire, and that s exactly what happened I loved the whole concept of using nature s elements in reference to the main characters What a creative idea Great story Okay I really liked the start of this story The sci fi genre with the magic of the earth, air, and water elementals was an interesting change to other stories in this anthology I have to say though, that it kind of lost me at the M M M scene I was kind of hoping for Fire to appear and then when it turned into a menage, I was a bit disappointed On a positive note, the author did a good job adhering to the reader request and bringing the photo to life and I liked the writing style as well.Do Okay I really liked the start of this story The sci fi genre with the magic of the earth, air, and water elementals was an interesting change to other stories in this anthology I have to s
This story started out really promising It quickly created a world of which I found myself intrigued I found myself a bit uneasy, though, because I knew that due to the short length, it probably wouldn t be able to fully develop And that s what happened here I felt like the story was sta
Story PromptDear Author,I am intrigued with this photo and these men They are uniquely individual, but together they are power and magic I imagine they are not quite of this world Though what that world would be and who they are within it, is your story to tell one minor deet I